I was helpless as I raised my head to the third floor of the hotel, desperately, hopelessly  trying to transmit my strength to you standing on the ledge outside.   In a dream I had heard your cries, had been impelled to come to the street in front of this place and although I know it’s been years … but there you were, although I only just recognised you with your clothes on.

Monday, On location: On the outside
Tuesday, Take it away: I was helpless...
Wednesday, Words, Inc.: Transmit, Raise, Hotel
Thursday, The plot thickens: Its been years, but there you were
Friday, Free for all: In a dream I had

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Comment by Sandra Davies on February 19, 2012 at 9:47pm

Of course I should have done - thank you Kerry, I hate it when I miss things like that!   I'll edit now.

Comment by Kerry Logan on February 19, 2012 at 6:50pm

Great as always! I wonder if you could have used - the ledge. instead of using third floor twice? 

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