Anticipation. I remembered the moment right before my favorite band entered onto the stage. The lights dimmed, the crowds hunger audible, a faint electric E...maybe a tap of the snare. Damp artificial fog filled the air.
Unsigned talent in its purest form. You can’t help but admire a group of artists that have come from nothing to such heights of popularity without the aid of Jimmy Iovine. I closed my eyes. I’m finally here I thought. ‘Kill Screen! Kill Screen! Kill Screen!’ we crecendoed. It’s getting hot, but easy to ignore when you’re in a moment of pure bliss. I can hardly take it. My cheeks feel flush. She turned and smiled at me. I grabbed her hand. It was perfect. Here we go…
Thirty-nine minutes and twenty four seconds of slurred lyrics. ‘Fuck you’? Distortion and poor timing. My heroes had been had at the hand of too much rye. Rye!? Speechless we turned away and headed for a bright green ‘Exit’. Out forty-seven dollars and fifteen cents. We never saw each other again.
Comment
I wonder whether he was more upset about the wasted money or the lost woman? Altogether a very disappointing evening, well portrayed.
Comment by Gita Smith on February 19, 2013 at 9:13am The last band I paid to see cost far more than $47.15, so you got off easy.
I really like the energy of this. Good job.
Comment by Sandra Davies on February 17, 2013 at 11:36pm Nice flash, unexpected from the title and intriguing end - hope to read more of your writing.
Started by Kerry Logan in Outside the Prompt May 7.
Started by Missa Belle in General. Last reply by Kerry Logan Jan 21.
Started by Blake N. Cooper in General. Last reply by D.B. Dean Dec 17, 2012.
© 2013 Created by Blake N. Cooper.

You need to be a member of ThinkingTen—A Writer's Playground to add comments!
Join ThinkingTen—A Writer's Playground