Perfect lips where tight with disgust and her pert little nose wrinkled at the scent on the wind. For the hundredth time I looked at my brothers fiancée and wondered what he saw in her. I mean, I knew what he SAW in her but....I just wished there was something more.

 

Perhaps I selected this place out of spite. Perhaps it was because I was sure she would hate it and he would love it. Perhaps I wanted to highlight, with this location, all the reasons she was wrong for him. What ever my motivation had been, I knew it also meant I was an awful person.

 

He loved her and I guess that should be enough for me. A firm, lithe body; perfectly encased in the latest fashions. Expertly arched eyebrows hung over eyes adorned with makeup designed to highlight every point of beauty. She was breathe-taking, men literally stumbled as she floated past. The seagulls seemed to scream "A goddess is on the waterfront, everyone look."

 

I took a deep breath of the crisp sea air; minerals and life hung heavy with each breath. The wind whipped and teased at my pony tail. Oh how I loved the sea.

 

I looked out over the restaurant patio area, the perfect scene for a wedding. The majestic ocean crashed against ageless rocks, the birds called and LIFE took center stage. I could see my brother eating it all up. It was perfect for him.

 

She reached up and slowly cinched down her head scarf, "Are you sure this was the only place open for the wedding Tammi? I mean. I know I told you to handle it and I didn’t much care about the details. But, this place has that awful smell."

 

My brothers head whipped around, "Awful smell Hun? That smell is the sea. Its seaweed and animals and water and ...and life Hun. Isn’t this place amazing?" He turned to her, hands out stretched.

 

"It... it is so....dirty. I mean, I know we asked Tammi to help... but ...I thought she would pick something a bit more...." She looked confused , glancing over his shoulder to me.

 

"Sterile?" I supplied. I smothered a grin behind a fake cough, turned and left my brother and the love of his life to it. What better way to show him how perfectly wrong for him she was than to contrast her against everything he loves.

 

"Hey Tom, you tell her about your honey moon trip to Alaska yet? How about the camping in the woods, the bug and the mud facials and the romantic moon light evenings in the tent you have planned?" The final nail driven home, I watched it all begin to crumble.

 

Whoever said opposites attract had never had the two opposites compare their passions. This was all working perfectly. I was a truly awful person, but sometimes a sister has to do the dirty work for the good of the family. He might be sad for now, but he would thank me later. At least – I was pretty sure he would.

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On Location, Monday:
On the waterfront


The only rule: somehow tie the above location into your story.

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Comment by Jeanette Cheezum on March 21, 2011 at 7:02am
Congrats!
Comment by Sandra Davies on March 21, 2011 at 2:57am
I remember enjoying this the first time round - cannot think why I didn't comment then.   Only thing I would change is 'Hun' to the more usual 'Hon' despite the phonetics ...
Comment by alisa rynay haller on September 29, 2010 at 11:57am
perfect! I think we all wish we could pull this off in real life from time to time!
Comment by Jeanette Cheezum on September 21, 2010 at 9:00am
DB, this is a geat view of the perfect sister/not!!! great fun.
Comment by Gaye Bear (Gabby) on September 21, 2010 at 6:40am
Oh, I l-o-o-o-ve this story. Just the sort of thing I would love to have done to what I call a "frip". Well written.
Comment by D.B. Dean on September 20, 2010 at 5:26pm
Sometimes running water is not enough. I camped pond side for two weeks once. I swam for hours every day...by end of first week we took a trip into town just so I could wash my hair!!!!. My husband swore i looked fine but I just felt so much better with clean hair. i am a mountain girl by nature but even I need a hot shower regularly :D
Comment by Travis Smith on September 20, 2010 at 4:57pm
Fun piece DB. I was pulling for the fiance also - I was waiting for her to surprise us and like the place - and yes - I wanted to see him take the "hot girl" on a camping trip. You can really only see her true beauty after a couple of days away from running water.
Comment by D.B. Dean on September 20, 2010 at 3:05pm
you were hoping tommy boy got the hot girl wernt you elliott!!!!
Comment by Elliott Cox on September 20, 2010 at 1:55pm
I was rooting for the fiancee to come around and say something profound that would let us know that she gets it, but I like your ending better.

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