Stood face to face in front of the towering ruins of this deserted, bastard French-style, not-quite-English chateau, as the sun reached its zenith and the shadows disappeared almost to naught, both became, for each other, for the briefest of moments, as they once upon a time had been.
Then each took time to recognise the extent to which the other had now become adult. Saw that the bright, sharp edges of their once-innocent selves, each so familiar to the other, had been scribbled over and redrawn. Sketchy outlines, palimpsest, had made changes, some self-drawn, some attempts at re-design by others who had maybe not cared, not sufficiently appreciated, the original.
But each had known the original of the other.
And each wondered, unbidden and with a sudden heartfelt, gut-ached plunge, how they would be now. Would their respective now-selves recognise, understand, still fit together as they once so seamlessly had done? Or had the festooned trail of separate experiences completely changed their shapes so that they had become strangers, awkward and mutually abrasive?
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Comment by Carrol Strain on February 26, 2012 at 11:56am I really like this one, Sandra. What an apt description of how we change as we grow, changing ourselves purposefully - or not - and allowing others, even those who "had maybe not ... sufficiently appreciated the original" to change us, too.
Comment by Sandra Davies on February 23, 2012 at 2:01am Yes it IS a continuation from 'Solitary confinement', wasn't sure whether or not to say so in the hope it stood alone, AND I'm trying different voices. Thanks
Comment by Travis Smith on February 22, 2012 at 10:06am I think this is a continuation of a previous one? - or at least an addition to it. Either way, it raises interesting questions.
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