Carrol Strain
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Sandra Davies commented on Carrol Strain's blog post His Trial
"I was thoroughly engrossed until the final para. and then you lost me completely - obviously a cultural reference I've missed out on - sorry!"
8 hours ago
Matthew Ross commented on Carrol Strain's blog post His Trial
"Whoa! Is this some alternate universe where manlike reptiles rule? Or is this Iowa 2012?"
8 hours ago
Gita Smith commented on Carrol Strain's blog post His Trial
"Holy cannoli.  I nominate this for Best Ten of the Month! Love every thing about it. I flinched at the terrible sentence of being monitored for 10 years and laughed at the orange tail versus the gray-brown one. I love the surprise of this."
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Carrol Strain posted a blog post

His Trial

He was young, untested. The first words out of his mouth were a lie, and I knew it, but he thought he could fool me. I nodded and smiled. “Go on,” I said. He seemed not to notice that he was stepping further into my trap.Obviously, he didn't know the rules of the new order. He thought he could still buy his way out, and he tried that with me. I raised an eyebrow at his temerity, and, though he tried to disguise it, I could see that he slumped a little at this minor defeat. He tried again. “My…See More
23 hours ago
Carrol Strain commented on Jenny P's blog post Swallowed Whole
"I really like the way you describe her loneliness as an "emptiness forming in her belly, swirling and lengthening." Nicely done."
May 17
Carrol Strain commented on Gita Smith's blog post The Day a Naked Man Walked into the First United Methodist
"Best church day ever. Brilliant!"
May 10
Carrol Strain commented on Robert Crisman's blog post Bin Laden Letters Posted (The Sunday Times)
"Good Lord! Can't wait to read more of your stuff. And more. Keep it coming."
May 7
Gita Smith commented on Carrol Strain's blog post Madonna and Child
"Welcome back on the horse, Carrol. Apparently it's a thoroughbred! I liked every bit of this, and you made the contrast vivid between the two characters with lovely details like the sturdy pumps and the dirty rumpled work pants. Hope to see…"
May 4
Travis Smith commented on Carrol Strain's blog post Madonna and Child
"I like this one Carol - your description is really good - and makes it easy to picture the whole scene"
May 4
Matthew Ross commented on Carrol Strain's blog post Madonna and Child
"At first I thought, why is she with this guy, but then I realized she wasn't. If this was Texas, she'd have her finger poised on the trigger of a Glock. Nice work here."
May 4
Carrol Strain commented on Sandra Davies's blog post Interruption
"Great use of the prompt, Sandra. You weave emotions and relationships so delicately. Lovely."
May 4
Carrol Strain commented on Carrol Strain's blog post Madonna and Child
"Thanks, Sandra. It's really good to be back here again. I thought I was busy before with working full time and moonlighting. Now, we're moving, too. But the ten-minute rule is a good one for me. Surely, even in the busiest of times, I can…"
May 4
Sandra Davies commented on Carrol Strain's blog post Madonna and Child
"VERY visual Carol, and great finale."
May 4
Carrol Strain posted a blog post

Madonna and Child

She marched down the sidewalk like the queen of England, spine as straight as an iron rod, sturdy pumps clacking rhythmically on the concrete. A flower pot of a hat sat on her head like a crown, and her well-made coat was buttoned all the way up, even though it was a warmish day.He walked - or rather, careened - several steps behind her, keeping his distance but yelling all the same, arms and legs flying every which way, hair unruly, plaid shirt buttoned unevenly, dirty work pants rumpled and…See More
May 4
Mommyhood Bythe Handful left a comment for Carrol Strain
"Hi, Carrol. I haven't really taken the time to figure things out just yet. How does friending work here?"
Apr 20
Carrol Strain left a comment for Mommyhood Bythe Handful
"I think we could be friends, if you're willing. Welcome to T10! - Carrol"
Apr 20

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Favorite Work of Fiction?
Only one? I LOVE fiction.
Favorite Author?
Depends on what I read last. Recent favorites: Garth Stein, Anne Tyler, Marion Zimmer Bradley. The list goes on.
Favorite Quote?
"At some point I believe one has to stop holding back for fear of alienating some imaginary reader or real relative or friend, and come out with personal truth." - May Sarton
About Me
I offer ghostwriting and and editing services on Elance and ebook publishing by way of Sturdy Grace Press on Smashwords.
Website/Blog
http://sites.google.com/site/sturdygrace/

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His Trial

He was young, untested. The first words out of his mouth were a lie, and I knew it, but he thought he could fool me. I nodded and smiled. “Go on,” I said. He seemed not to notice that he was stepping further into my trap.

Obviously, he didn't know the rules of the new order. He thought he could still buy his way out, and he tried that with me. I raised an eyebrow at his temerity, and, though he tried to disguise it, I could see that he slumped a little at this minor defeat. He tried…

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Posted on May 29, 2012 at 8:32pm — 3 Comments

Madonna and Child

She marched down the sidewalk like the queen of England, spine as straight as an iron rod, sturdy pumps clacking rhythmically on the concrete. A flower pot of a hat sat on her head like a crown, and her well-made coat was buttoned all the way up, even though it was a warmish day.

He walked - or rather, careened - several steps behind her, keeping his distance but yelling all the same, arms and legs flying every which way, hair unruly, plaid shirt buttoned unevenly, dirty work pants…

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Posted on May 4, 2012 at 7:04am — 5 Comments

This Scar

This scar? This one right here?

It's no wonder you don't remember it. You were so young. You were staying with your grandparents, I think, and your dad and I went camping with another couple.

What’s that? Oh, yeah. You’re right. I really don't like camping so much. I thought I did, back then, though. Everyone else I knew said they liked it, back then.…

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Posted on March 29, 2012 at 6:51pm — 7 Comments

Breakfast with Joseph Campbell (canvas)

I'd always meant to read some of Joseph Campbell's writing, and recently after a friend mentioned him in conversation, I picked up a book of his lectures from the library. By the time I was halfway through reading the first lecture, I felt I had found an old…

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Posted on March 3, 2012 at 1:00pm — 1 Comment

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At 9:45am on April 20, 2012, Mommyhood Bythe Handful said…

Hi, Carrol. I haven't really taken the time to figure things out just yet. How does friending work here?

At 11:08pm on December 10, 2011, Bill Goldman said…

Thanks.  Now I have to figure out the lay of the land.  Any tips or perhaps a secret map so I can get with the program?  

As Groucho said "Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend.  Inside of a dog, it's too dark to read."

Tomorrow morning I'm going to the home of a "hoarder" to help her clear out her house so she can actually sleep in her bed and navigate her hallway.  Maybe after that I'll visit the site and get familiar-- it's very enticing.   Bill

At 1:38am on September 5, 2011, Cath Barton said…
Thank you for your friend request Carrol. As you'll have gathered, I haven't been around here for a while (off on various other writing projects). It's a great place to practice. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. 
At 7:20am on June 29, 2011, Ann Mintz said…
Thanks so much for your friend request.  I usually am very active on this site-- the last month is an exception!  I look forward to seeing you on T-10.
At 9:50pm on June 21, 2011, D.B. Dean said…
every one should be CSs friend..she rocks!
At 9:43pm on June 21, 2011, Sandra Davies said…
Thank you for your friend request - very glad to accept because I've enjoyed reading your words.
At 1:36pm on June 13, 2011, D.B. Dean said…
It's about time you got here lady!. YAY - now we can PARTY
 
 
 

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